Chapter 5.1 is now up, in which the focus of the pokegirls story returns to predominantly pokegirls.
http://pokegirls.org/storyboard-listing/424-zypheit/an-eternity-between-the-cracks/2482-an-eternity-between-the-cracks-05-1.html

I also went through and edited chapter 1 because there were some monster run-on sentences among other mistakes. I also included a translation for Chandrakanta's phrase in Hindi.

My review thread can be found here if anyone would like to leave comments or questions.
https://www.tapatalk.com/groups/pokegirlspokecenter/reviews-for-zypheit-t746.html?view=unread#unread

Loose Threads 117 is posted.

Please review at Kerrik's Review Page

Chapter 21 is here!

 

As always, please leave reviews at my review page.

Loose Threads 116 is posted.

Please review at Kerrik's Review Page