Chapter 5.1 is now up, in which the focus of the pokegirls story returns to predominantly pokegirls.
http://pokegirls.org/storyboard-listing/424-zypheit/an-eternity-between-the-cracks/2482-an-eternity-between-the-cracks-05-1.html
I also went through and edited chapter 1 because there were some monster run-on sentences among other mistakes. I also included a translation for Chandrakanta's phrase in Hindi.
My review thread can be found here if anyone would like to leave comments or questions.
https://www.tapatalk.com/groups/pokegirlspokecenter/reviews-for-zypheit-t746.html?view=unread#unread