The final portion of the fifth chapter of An Eternity Between the Cracks is now posted
http://pokegirls.org/storyboard-listing/424-zypheit/an-eternity-between-the-cracks/2498-an-eternity-between-the-cracks-05-3.html

If you would like to offer comment or criticism, feel free to post in my review thread on the forum site or through discord.
https://www.tapatalk.com/groups/pokegirlspokecenter/reviews-for-zypheit-t746.html